Episodes · Season 1
Logline: Two soldiers overhear a classified conversation about a secret project and begin investigating — a chain of small choices that ends in the murder of their criminal contact.
The Setup
The pilot’s job is to establish the world, the characters, and the central mystery — then hook you on the investigation. It opens on Greg and Tom in a diner, bickering about Tom’s weekend absences and his infamous “recount” excuse, and ends with the two of them complicit in a cover-up they never meant to join.
Scene Flow
- Diner (cold open) — Greg and Tom’s dynamic and the “recount” running gag.
- Military transport — the daily routine; a meeting is set.
- Locker room — Commander Bradley assigns basement night watch.
- Commander’s office — Tom shreds papers; they overhear Bradley and General Bond discuss “the sample.” The mystery is planted.
- Section 1-B lab — a glimpse of what’s being tested.
- Locker room, after shift — the plan forms: go see Vinney.
- Vinney’s hideout — a forced hack, then gunfire as guards close in.
- Streets, rooftops, alley — the chase, and Bradley pressing them into the operation.
- Bridgeway home — the aftermath, and the decision to keep digging.
Themes
- Curiosity vs. caution — wanting the truth against the danger of finding it.
- Complicity through action — how good people get implicated by small choices.
- Authority & obedience — follow orders, or question them.
- The cost of truth — learning something that changes everything.
Production note
Format: ~22 min · Target audience: 18+ · Status: script in first draft, 13 scenes mapped, animation in progress.
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